Disclaimer: Simple ... too young, or if reading this is illegal where you are, please leave. Since I know you won't anyway, try not to get in trouble because of me ... K? All copyrights belong to me, the author. Do not distribute without my permission. Do not make people pay for it .. etc. This story is a complete work of fiction. It is not meant to imply anything about the sexuality of any member of the group Nsync. Not really my business anyway..
Authors note: I hope you enjoy this.
It's my first attempt at writing erotic fiction. It's my first attempt at writing anytihing I intended for others to read. so I REALLY hope you enjoy this. This is just the introduction to the world of Derux. You'll learn how to pronounce that later on. : ) Only one character is introduced. Comments, and suggestions are very welcome. Flames will be disregarded completely. Please include 'Crimson Tears' or 'CT' in the subject of any e-mail you send, or good ole powerfilter might eradicate ya. : ) Enough talk ... read!
Crimson Tears Introduction
"He stands 6' 4''. He weighs an even 200 pounds. His blond hair seems to change with his mood. His magic is strong, but I don't think he could protect himself in this world." I heard him say into the reciever. "What? Oh, his name is Jacob. His eyes caught my attention as well. I don't know what color they are exactly. He had beautiful, crystaline eyes. Even his eyes are powerful, but he doesn't know it. When blue, the color is so sharp you could lose yourself in them. He could kill you before you knew he had moved. When red, they show all the anger, and fear he has felt in his entire life. His eyes show his emotions. His emotions hold great power. Yes, I am going to train him personally. Thank you, sir. Goodbye."
"Who was that?" I asked timidly. "That was Raziel, a seer. He likes to know everything about new students. Especially the ones like you." He smiled as he said this. With most people I can interprit what they are thinking when I look into their eyes. It was different with him. He hid his emotions, as well as his thoughts. I wished I could do that. "Jacob, I think you should sit down." I gave a confused look, but complied. "I'm sure many have told you this, but you have great power hidden within your emotions. If you can learn to harness these powers, you can become a super power." "Me? A super power? Thats impossible. A super power could destroy the world with a wave of his hand. All I can do is change the length of my hair, and the color of my eyes!" I was shocked at this revelation. I grew up believing in super powers, unlike the Zebwa. I think I may have gone too deep into this world. Too deep for those who haven't grown up here. Let me start over.
::You see a flashing light. It almost seems to vibrate. You can feel the power as your body moves to another realm.::
I know you must be wondering. What happened, and where are you, right? I took you into a realm where you can see my story. As I tell you, you will see the past. My past, the past of Derux (De - Rue), the past of the Zebwa, and the past of the super powers. Let me start with the Zebwa. The Zebwa are a race that do not harness any power. There are Zebwa in every realm, and there are super powers in every realm as well. Zebwa do not believe in the super powers. They believe that magic is evil, or differences in general. They live only to kill those who harness magical power, or are undead. They shun those who have attractions to a member of the same sex. Almost like the Christians of your realm, eh? The
Zebwa are like them in many ways. They believe in one God, and have a bible almost identical to yours.
Derux is my world. It doesn't have continents, only islands, and the mainland. The mainland is the major source of power for all of the magical powers used on this planet. Towers, and temples keep this power from erupting, and destroying this world. It holds creatures you could only imagine. In fact, you do imagine them. Vampires, werewolves, dragons, drakes. You name it, it's here.
The super powers are a hard bunch to explain. They are Gods, I guess. Imortal, all powerful. The works. There are evil ones, there are good ones. They are constantly at war. They count on mortals to aid them in their fight. It is up to the mortal to decide where they go. Each has it's destiny. The super powers refuse to live on the same planet as the mortals, so they moved to other planets, hoping to find one they could survive on. They tried every planet in this universe, but the eternity of suffocating over, and over again wasn't to their liking. Finally they created a realm of pure power. Only mortals that they deem worthy are permitted inside these realms. No mortal has ever seen these realms. With an exception, or two. We'll get to that later.
Training centers are posted throughout the world. Like colleges. I don't feel I need to explaint hat one to you. Except for one thing. This is where every mortal with magical instincts goes to learn how to harness their powers.
This was my short introduction to the world of Derux. Just a test to see how you react to my style of story telling.
To be continued...
Tell me what you think. If you want this story to continue, please e-mail me. I won't continue it unless you want me to. This is the only time comments will be required. I just don't want to even start a story none of you think you'll read ... I know it has no boyband, or sexual anything in it yet,b ut it's just an introduction.
Bear with me ... please? :-)