Determined to Succeed

By ben smith

Published on Aug 30, 2003

Gay

Determination to succeed! By Benme_over Edited by Drew Hunt

Authors Notes:-

This story contains Sex between men. If you are under 18 in the Uk (or appropriate legal age in your country) please stop reading here. If such mentioned material may offend you please stop reading too. This story is fiction and any resemblance to reality is pure coincidence.

Though this story may involve unsafe sex (It is only fiction), and I believe in playing safe (look after yourself and your partner).

Hope you enjoy my story, and of course please email me with your comments good or bad. It is always nice for us writers to know other's are reading our stories, and know what readers think of the stories as they develop.

Benme_over@lycos.co.uk Enjoy!!

CHAPTER FIVE -

"Morning Lover-Boy!" Jase said as he whipped the duvet off me.

"Hi." I said wearily as I rubbed my eyes, trying to remember what I was doing in Jase's bed. Of course it all came back to me and I must have had a smile on my face, because Jase said I looked like a cat that had got the cream. To be honest I hadn't been this happy in a long time maybe ever.

"Here's your breakfast Honey." He said.

"Wow breakfast in bed I could get used to this you know." I teased.

"I don't think so Honey, once I've made an honest man out of you it all stops." he replied placing the tray down on the bed, then he left to run a bath.

"Right lover-boy bath time." He said coming back into the bedroom a few minutes later, a wide grin on his face.

"Have you got any ducks I can play with?" I asked in a mock kids voice.

"I have something much more fun if you're a good boy." He replied slapping my bare arse as I stood up. He made me close my eyes, then I took his arm and he lead me to the bathroom.

"Ok you can open them now!" He said excitedly.

"Wow, Jase your wonderful, and I love you so much." I declared once I'd seen what effort he'd put into making the bathroom look like a Hawaiian beach party. There were tea lights everywhere some were even scented. There was a bottle of champagne in a bucket of ice. In one area, which was free of tea lights, he'd decorated it up with some sort of red cloth to make it look even cosier. It was obvious that he must have been up earlier to prepare everything.

"What about work." I asked with a quivering voice.

"Sorted, we're working later today." He replied as he smacked his lips onto mine. We began to kiss deeply and passionately. His lips tasted so sweet, I could have kissed him all day long, but he broke away and ushered me to the bath helping me to step into it.

"I can't believe that you'd go to so much bother just for me Jase. Your wonderful." I said as tears of happiness rolled down my cheeks. I was in an emotional mess.

He joined me in the bath, we both sat facing each other. He poured the champagne into the two glasses, which he'd put beside the ice bucket. We just sat there looking into one another's eyes lovingly, drinking the champagne and relaxing. Slowly we started soaping each other's bodies, and splashing each other with water, we were like two 8 year olds. Then he knelt in the bath and gently kissed me, he was so tender in his touch. His lips were so soft as they met mine. Our tongues entwined as we caressed each other slowly and softly feeling our way around each other's bodies. If there's a heaven I was already there.

Of course the kissing and caressing continued as we washed each others bodies and drank the Champagne. Slowly we managed to get out of the bath without losing contact with each other's bodies, neither of us wanting to let go of the other. Once we were out of the bath Jase towelled my whole body slowly and I did the same to him. Then he led me back into the bedroom and laid me down on the bed. He climbed on top of me astride my chest and kissed me passionately, caressing my mouth with his tongue. Slowly he broke off and started kissing my face, eyes, ears and nose not missing any part of me, he then worked his way down my chin and neck licking sucking and kissing me. I tried to stroke his hair but he gently pushed my hands to either side of me.

"Jase I want to touch and kiss you too." I protested.

"shhhh, there is plenty of time for that, just enjoy yourself Lover-boy." He replied. Then he started to suck on my left nipple and then he moved to the right one, before he worked his way slowly down to my naval. I didn't know how much more I could take because my cock was throbbing like it had never done before. Every nerve in my body was tingling with the intense pleasure that this kind loving man was giving me. I had dreamt of moments like this but even in my dreams it never got as good as what Jase was doing to me. He kissed all around my cock and balls without touching them, he continued working his way down my legs and thighs. I was in such ecstasy that the fact he hadn't touched my cock and balls didn't even register in my brain.

Once he had sucked each toe he gently asked me to turn over, which I willingly did, it was like a dream that I didn't want to wake up from. He continued his journey up the backs of my legs to my butt cheeks. He kissed every inch of my cheeks and continued up my back without touching my crack or hole. He worked his way all the way up my back and neck.

"I love you!" he whispered as he finished kissing my neck.

"I love you too Jase." I whispered in ecstasy, thinking that my dream was about to end.

"Don't move Lover-boy." He whispered and got up and left the room. I didn't know what was next but I was sure as hell going to wait and see what else this wonderful man had planned for me.

"Close your eyes lover-boy" he shouted before re-entering the bedroom. I followed his wishes excited at what he might do next. He sat astride my legs and started rimming my bum; he worked his tongue up and down my crack and teased my hole by just flicking his tongue in little dart movements. I could actually feel my hole quiver with the intense erotic touch of his tongue and once again every nerve of my body was tingling. My cock was the hardest it had ever been, my mind was all over the place and I was starting to sweat. Suddenly the sensation on my arse was replaced with a cold feeling, actually it was a freezing sensation, which I now know was a cube of ice, which he was running up and down my crack and hole. Jase alternated between his hot soft tongue and the ice cube two or three times until the cube melted. By this time I was rolling my head from side to side. I was panting for breath with the pleasure I was receiving. He slowly lifted himself off me and knelt to one side as he turned me onto my back.

"Well Lover-boy its time for the grand finale." He said grinning. He then placed himself between my legs, which he spread apart.

"Oh Jase your wonderfuuuullll." I said as he took my cock head into his mouth, he clamped his lips tightly around the Glans. He slowly lowered his hot, tight and moist lips down my shaft until I could feel the back of his throat touch the tip of my cock. He only had to glide his lips up and down my shaft three times before I felt my spunk working its way up my cock, he must have realised that I was about to cum as he gripped my shaft tighter with his lips. He gently took a firm hold of my ball sac with one of his hands and slowly but firmly lowered his lips all the way down my shaft. As Jase reached the bottom he caressed that sensitive area between the ball sac and arse crack. Then my cock started to erupt in his mouth I was violently quivering with the sensation of my climax. I shot load after load of cum into his mouth and he swallowed every drop. There must have been four or five heavy shots of cum in rapid succession.

After I stopped cumming he released my cock from his mouth and laid down beside me, we cuddled for about an hour not saying a word, there was no need. We were two new lovers sharing each others embrace.

We eventually got up and took a shower together. Then we dressed and had a quick lunch before we went to work. We both found it hard not being able to kiss or cuddle throughout the afternoon and evening. In quiet periods we would sneak a quick kiss in the cloakroom of the cafe. With each kiss my cock went hard, we were both really horny most of the day. We whispered little love words as we passed each other behind the counter. Bill even teased us once or twice, saying we were like two school kids. Bill knew that we were both under the age of consent for gay sex, but he didn't agree with the age of consent being higher for gays than it was for straights. I actually felt that I was not only his son's lover but also part of his family, I felt as though I belonged. This was a feeling that I hadn't had for years. Work was a breeze and fun just like life. I was on a high due to the chemistry between Jase and I.

I eventually went back to see my mother at the flat but I found out that she had moved back home to the pub. This confused me. I phoned the pub and dad picked up the phone but hung up as soon as I spoke. When I told Jase and Bill they couldn't believe that my dad could be so cold hearted towards his son, his own flesh and blood as Bill said. I just thanked them both for their kindness and love.

Over the next few weeks all three of us worked hard as it was the peak season, so the cafe needed all hands on deck so to speak. We were worked into the ground, but none of us complained, we all just mucked in together. Sometimes working twelve to fourteen hour shifts. Bill wanted to employ more staff, but the cafe hadn't been making that big a profit to allow him to employ anyone else.

After three weeks of hard work without a single day off, things calmed down a little and Bill decided to employ a woman to do most of the cooking at busy periods, which allowed him to serve. This meant we could all take a little time off. Bill could just afford to employ her, but he knew if he didn't, we would all suffer from exhaustion.

With the money that I had saved due to having no time to spend it, I booked a table at a plush restaurant. I then rang Jase telling him to be washed and dressed ready for me getting in. After booking the restaurant I bought him one of those cute just for you teddies and a card to match. I then bought him a single red rose. I managed to sneak into our bedroom whilst he was having a shower. I placed a note on the bed saying, "To night my love I want to spoil you! A taxi will pick you up at 8pm." It didn't say anything else; I left it on his pillow and sneaked off again.

I was waiting outside the restaurant when he arrived. "Hello my knight in shining armour." I greeted him as he straightened his shirt after getting out of the taxi.

"Ben we can't eat here, they charge the earth." Jase said.

"ssssssssssshhh its all taken care of my dearest." I replied as I opened the restaurant door for Jase to enter. I had booked a table in an alcove so we would have a little privacy.

"Wow I've lived in Blackpool all my life but I've never been able to afford to come here," Jase commented.

"Well babes tonight is a night that you'll never forget." I replied holding his hand.

"May I take your order Sir?" The waiter asked, he was roughly the same age as Jase and I.

We ordered, and waited about 20 minutes for our meal to arrive. After the main course, we ordered and ate our sweet. As we were enjoying our coffee and after dinner mints, a Spanish guitar player started playing the tune 'I Will Always Love You.' Although Dolly Parton wasn't singing the song, it did what it was meant to. After the music had stopped I whispered to Jase "I will always love you Babes." Jase leant over the table and kissed me, neither of us cared where we were or who saw us, We were in a romantic world of our own.

After we left the restaurant, we walked along the promenade until we found an area of the beach where the tide was out. We both took our shoes and socks off and rolled up our trouser legs. Then hand in hand we walked along the sandy beach until we under the North Pier. It was quite late now and all the activity had ended on the Pier, so we were quite secluded and away from any prying eyes.

Jase cuddled me from behind kissing every inch of my neck, which sent shivers of pleasure down my spine. I eventually turned round with-in his arms and we started kissing passionately. It wasn't long before we were caressing each other sliding our hands inside each other's tops, our lips never breaking contact until we lifted each other's shirts off.

"Ben I love you more than words can say!"

I knelt down and undid Jase's zip fly, I worked my way into his button fly boxers. I was greeted with his cock, which was rock hard. I took his cock head into my mouth and held it there for a moment before I sank all the way down his shaft. His cock tasted so good, there wasn't anything else I'd rather be doing, nor did I want to be with anyone else at that moment.

I worked hard on his cock sliding up and down the shaft licking and sucking as I went. He was ruffling my hair with his hands, suddenly he held my head tight to his stomach as he climaxed, shooting his cum into my mouth. When his climax had subsided and his cock softened, I stood up and kissed him.

"Happy Anniversary Darling" I said in his ear.

"Oh Shit Ben, I forgot being so busy in the cafe." He seemed upset that he hadn't remembered that it was a month since we'd first met.

"No Jase, any other time I might have forgotten, but I've had so much shit going on in my life, that I couldn't forget the nicest day in my life." I explained, then I kissed his forehead.

"Ben you are such a nice guy, you have been through so much, and yet you are still very loving and giving." He said as we started to walk home.

I Made Jase close his eyes as I led him into our bedroom, I'd arranged for Bill to place the teddy and card on our bed whilst we were out.

"Ok you can open your eyes now." I said softly into his ear as I held him from behind.

"Oh Ben your so sweet." He said as he picked the card up and opened it. "Tonight must have cost you a fortune"

"Well it did, but your worth every penny of it Jase." I replied as he once more kissed me passionately.

We eventually worked our way to the bed and managed to undress without letting go of each other. We didn't make love it wasn't the right time. No we just held each other tight and drifted off to sleep.

TO be continued

Please email me your comments on this story at benme_over@lycos.co.uk

Next: Chapter 6


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