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With this I am trying to write that in the style of Old English prosody with alliteration and caesuras. The rules roughly obeyed: each line consists of five syllables, caesura, five more syllables; at least three alliterative stresses per line, at least one on either side of the caesura; hyphen and apostrophe are the only punctuation symbols used.
Comments on the technique are strongly requested.
Heldar
by Eli the Bearded
After the wonderful . win we went back to Heldar's mead hall at . Middenmeer Merry celebration song . and supping followed Red Heldar royal . ring-giver rationed well-wrought weapons . and weighty gold Heldar bid me follow . him from the feast then Beneath breastplate of . brightest steel and brass his chest heaved heavy . He hugged me hard out of sight from all . others Our bond past liege-lord and loyal . follower was love
We stripped off strong . armor and steel mail Heldar's sweat dripped . from huge hairy muscles Strong I stood above . and stabbed my straight rod into his red . relaxed rear hole He greeted me with . great groans of gay lust Passionately I . pumped my proud purple sex in the soft seat . Slowly sensations teetered at the . top Tight tensions then flowed forth fast hot . fluid fresh from my flesh Love's liquid leaked . from my liege-lord's loins and also oozed out . his own hard object Streams of stinging sweat . stole my attention from the fresh scent of . our loving's fluid I licked lightly . at his lazy flow I hungered for him . He hastened to hump my mouth I made all . efforts to manage his size sucking sap . swallowing seepings His delight shot a . daunting draught of jam
He got a gold ring . from near his gauntlets and crouching careful . cupped my crotch put cold ring around my soft . rod and sack of rocks Wear the well-wrought ring . and we will be one he told me I touched . his taught torso Yes
Elijah ------ elijah@mathlab.sunysb.edu . bgriffin@ic.sunysb.edu
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