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The story is almost finished and I decided to publish it as a way to motivate myself to complete it.
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Thanks for reading, B
On Saturn
Chapter 1
[June 6th, 2015 - Present day]
The sound of my cell phone's message ringtone snapped me out of my reverie and I quickly checked it out, reading the text that'd just arrived from Abby.
"I'm outside."
I got up from my bed, pushing my laptop aside and started for my door, before stopping to check out the somewhat messy floor and desk in my room. I was about to try and hide the strewn out clothes, sort the stuff on my desk, when I thought,
"Fuck it." Although my room was clearly not tidy enough to my mother's standards, there was no need to keep up any appearances with Abby. She knew me well enough that my stupid bedroom being messy wouldn't be a problem.
I stomped down the stairs to get the door, my footsteps resounding loudly throughout my empty house. This was a Saturday, in the last week of school before the summer.
"Hey" I said after I opened the door and found her standing there, holding her phone in her hand. She smiled at me and caused me to smile back widely.
"Hey" she said, looking into my eyes as she walked up the couple of steps that led to the entrance door before tiptoeing and throwing her arms around my neck. I hugged her back with both arms, reveling in the feeling of closeness. I closed the door behind her and couldn't help but to check her out, like every time I saw her. She wore tight denim shorts and a white tank top that showed off her belly button. She wasn't exactly skinny, but she was fairly thin, with just the right amount of flesh in the right places. She wore her dirty blonde hair loose, with her waves falling down just past her shoulders. She was 14 at the time, almost a year younger than me.
I had just turned 15 a couple of months ago. I was 5'10" tall and had a lightly defined body thanks to dedicating myself to working out. My eyes are brown and my hair is dark brown and straight. I kept it short on the sides, but liked my fringe. I was hairless, except for some light hairs on my arms and calves, two tufts under my arms and I kept my pubes trimmed short.
"Are you alone?" She asked, even though she knew the answer to that question.
"Like almost every Saturday afternoon." I said, keeping my smile as I motioned her towards the stairs. "I was upstairs in my room."
She started walking up the steps and I followed closely behind. I could smell her perfume and it reminded me once again how much I love that scent. I watched her ass move inside her shorts in front of me. The combination made my dick start to get hard in my shorts. She turned slightly and grinned at me when she caught me staring at her butt.
"Dirty little Ethan." she teased as I blushed, but returned the grin with a comment of my own, looking into her blue eyes.
"You know I'm not little." She giggled at that and it made me giggle as well. She turned to keep walking up the stairs but slowed down considerably, making sure I could see her hips swaying. I just kept staring intently feeling my dick get harder. I adjusted it quickly in my boxers and walked up the final steps.
She got into my room and sat on my double bed. She looked across the floor at the clothes lying around and threw a knowing smile at me. I could just read her thoughts at the time.
"No comments" I said, "I know it's messy." She laughed at that and said
"I didn't say anything" she said
"You don't need to, I know what you're thinking." I replied, sitting beside her on my bed, our feet on the carpet.
"Tell me. What am I thinking now?" she said, looking intently into my brown eyes, making my dick impossibly hard.
Yes. We've been having sex for months.
Eight months. Really hot sex at that. We actually tried being a couple for some time, but we ended up outgrowing it. She's really mature for her age, and it was her who suggested us dating, at our age, didn't make sense. I was kind of hurt before I realized that she was right. We could be the best of friends and have sex all the same, just not exclusively. And it worked for us.
I didn't say a word, but just leaned in and kissed her on her lips. She returned the kiss, brushing my lips with her tongue. I moved my laptop to the side of the bed trying not to break the kiss and opened up my mouth to receive her curious tongue inside. I slid my tongue against hers and it sent a jolt from my belly through my arms and the back of my head.
I moved my hand up her waist and quickly cupped one of her breasts, rubbing and lightly squeezing over her top and bra. I could feel her hardening nipple against the palm of my hand just as she moaned softly inside my mouth. She had great boobs for her age, not really big, but definitely good sized to fit perfectly in my hand and then slip a little outside.
She rested her head on my shoulder and I felt her smell my neck. She grabbed my dick boldly over my shorts and massaged it, as she moaned a little louder this time. I moved my head to kiss her again and I felt her press against me, her lips sucking on mine. The way she gave herself to me drove me crazy and I broke the kiss to pull my t-shirt over my head. I pushed myself up my bed so I was half sitting, half lying against the headboard.
She followed me and searched for my mouth with hers, while lying on my naked chest. I avoided her mouth when she tried to kiss me, then I looked into her eyes and said to her
"You're thinking you can't wait to feel my cock in your mouth." She held my stare and started undoing the buttons in my shorts.
"Damn right" she said as she managed to pull my cock outside, pushing the front of my shorts and boxers below my balls.
I supported myself on my right elbow and looked at her as she moved down until her mouth found my cock head and wrapped her lips around it. I put my left hand on her hair and threw my head back, feeling her soft, warm mouth start taking more of my 6 inches inside.
I let out a deep moan as I felt the head of my cock hit her throat once and again, as Abby expertly slid her mouth up and down my shaft. I took her hair out of the way, grabbed it behind her head and tilted my head to the right, so I could look at her make love to my cock. My cock was medium thick, I thought it looked well proportioned. It was definitely not a pencil dick, so her lips fit nicely around it. I really loved watching her as she sucked my cock.
She took her mouth off and whimpered as she obviously swallowed some spit. I pushed slightly on the back of her head and she opened up her mouth again, trying to look into my eyes at the same time. I felt my cock being surrounded again by her warm, slippery mouth, and I groaned in pleasure as I noticed her pushing so my cock entered her throat.
"Ohh god, Abby. That's it." I moaned as I kept looking down at her, her lips pressing against my very short, trimmed pubes. I shifted my weight over to my left elbow and adjusted my hips so they were pointing more to the side in her direction. I put both my hands on her hair and started slowly pulling my cock out halfway and then pushing it in to her throat. I could feel her moans around my cock and noticed she started rubbing herself inside her panties and shorts.
We'd gotten good at sex. I knew she loved having her mouth fucked, and I loved fucking her mouth in return. I sped up a little, never letting go of her hair. I was too concentrated to notice my own moans, so I was surprised to hear myself moaning and groaning as I thrust my cock in and out of her mouth.
"Feels so good, baby." I started talking dirty to her. By now she was rubbing herself intently and breathing hard through her nose. "Yeah, just like that."
I let my cock out of her mouth so she could breathe properly. She started moaning really loud and looked briefly at me.
"Ohhh. Ohh, Ethan. Mmmhh. Do it again." she moaned. I knew she was really horny when she started talking dirty as well. I kept looking at her as I pushed my cock at her lips. She opened up wide and I pushed my cock all the way into her mouth and throat. I then started to do short thrusts, just pushing my cock head in and out of her throat, her lips being mashed against my pubes.
"Fuck, Abby. Oh, fuck yes. Take my cock." I realized I was going to cum if I kept up the pace so I let go of her head and pulled my cock out of her mouth. I sat up and pulled her face to me so we could kiss. She took my tongue in her mouth and sucked eagerly on it.
"You want to ride me now?" I asked her, smiling at her flushed face, her hand inside her panties.
"Fuck yes" she said as she started to take her tank top off, leaving her bra on.
Just then my cell phone rang and I looked at the locked screen. It was a message from Aaron.
"It's Aaron. He and Jordy are coming over." I said to Abby, who was in the middle of pushing her shorts off. She gave me a questioning look and a smile started to form in her lips. "You want to wait for them, then?" I asked her.
Yes. Aaron and Jordy were in this, too.
The four of us had been having sex for the last three months, or so. It sounds crazy, but I don't think it is. I mean, I was blown away when it started. I thought it would be just a one time thing and we'd be embarrassed about it afterwards. But it didn't happen overnight. The truth is that it slowly started to make sense to all of us. This is also why Abby and I weren't dating anymore. We felt that we were over the common conventions of other people, even though we couldn't put it in those terms back then. And we knew that we'd all better take advantage of our friendship and enjoy it while we had each other.
"Mmm, of course." she replied while she gave me the lustiest look she could muster. I smiled at her horniness.
"Could you finish me off, though?" I asked her, feeling the urge to empty my balls after being so close.
"Yeah," she smiled at me. "stand up" she said, while lying on her right side at the edge of my bed, propped up on her right elbow. I pushed my shorts and boxers off my feet together with my shoes and stood up next to the bed, presenting my hard, shiny cock to her face. We'd done this so many times. My bed was the perfect height.
She took my cock in her left hand and started licking under my glans. I had a sensitive spot there so I let out a loud moan when I felt her teasing it. She then opened up her mouth, stuck out her tongue and let my cock rest on it. She dropped her hand and looked at me. I grabbed the base of my cock and shook it so it slapped her tongue. She moaned, surely feeling my precum flying around and splattering her tongue and lips.
Then I plunged my cock fully into her mouth and held her head as I started groaning out in pleasure.
"Fuck, Abby, this is so good. You're so good." I said while feeling her throat gagging around my cock head. I then pulled out and started steadily fucking her mouth, feeling her tongue against the underside of my cock, teasing my sweet spot. She started sucking lightly on my cock, making it tighter as I thrust it in and out of her.
"Oh yeah! Oh yes, Abby. Milk my cum." I said to her as I slowed down my thrusts. She took my cock again in her hand, never letting the head out of her mouth, and started to jack me off really fast.
"Come on, baby. Just like that. Ohh fuck yes! Oh god!" I moaned and groaned in lust as I looked down at her playing with my shaft, craving my cum in her mouth.
She then opened up her mouth and put my cock on her tongue, while she jacked me hard. My hips started to thrust involuntarily, my groans being louder. I still had my left hand on her head, my right hand hanging down by my leg. I felt my cum rush up my shaft and with a jerk of my hips I shot out my first jet of cum.
"Arghhhhhhhhh" I groaned out and she moaned as she felt it hit her upper lip and finally land on her left cheek, barely missing her eye. My second and third shots landed in her mouth, while the rest of my cum just dribbled out onto her tongue.
I realized I had closed my eyes and my left hand was gripping her hair. I let out one last moan as I felt my body shudder, then I opened my eyes. Abby had drawn my cum from her cheek to her mouth and was licking it off her finger. She licked the cum that was left on my glans and then smiled up at me, satisfied.
I was in a daze for a couple of minutes, lying down beside her and letting her hug me, my arm draped across her belly. I was once again intoxicated by her perfume, this time with more of her scent coming off her hot flushed body.
After some time we decided to get up and put our clothes back on. We went down to the living room and plopped down on the big couch my parents had.
A few minutes later I heard the doorbell and got up to let Aaron and Jordy in.
[August 18th, 2014 - First day of highschool]
I arrived to my new school as a freshman, walking to the entrance with my two best friends in the world, Jordan and Aaron.
Jordan was my friend through all of elementary and middle school. We'd practically known each other forever. We lived relatively close by and attended the same schools. He was older than me by a month, having turned 14 in February. We were really close and I considered him a brother, since my own brother is 8 years older and never really paid much attention to me. My parents had me in their late thirties, so now being a teenager, they were in their fifties. They took their jobs much too seriously, so I normally spent a lot of time alone, with my brother living on his own since he moved out to go to college.
Jordy is an only child, so we naturally stuck to each other and thought of the other as a brother. His parents are really cool, I used to spend a lot of time at his place, sleeping over often. We kind of stopped doing that when we neared our teen years, although I couldn't really say why. I think he felt shy when our bodies started developing, keeping his sex talk to a minimum and never sharing his sexy thoughts with anyone.
I think he may have felt self-conscious about his body. You see, he was a stocky kid. He was a little chubby, even though his muscles were slowly developing and they showed quite nicely, he had some leftover baby fat all over and it made him look thick. He had green eyes and his hair was light brown, which he liked wearing a little long so its waves showed off. He was a couple of inches shorter than myself. He wore glasses sometimes, and had contact lenses the rest of the time, depending on his mood. I don't think he looked bad at all, just that kids at that age can be cruel and it got to him. As a result, and although I didn't quite know it at the time, I felt that we were slowly drifting apart from each other, compared to how close we were as little kids.
I'd met Aaron three years ago, when his family moved into our neighboorhood. He's almost a year older than me and Jordy and also a year ahead at school. He has two little sisters and lives with his mom. He often had to help with the girls when his mom was at work, since his dad was not around after they divorced. His hair was a dark brown and he liked to keep it short. His eyes were brown. He was tall, with a lean body, having practiced swimming since I can remember. I was always a little jealous of how good he looked, but it was a good jealous. I wanted to work out and look like he did, so it kind of motivated me in the end.
In my case, I was happy puberty had hit me at a reasonably 12 years old, so at 14 and 5 months I had a good bush of pubic hair, even though I'd start to trim it as I got older and started enjoying sex. A little hair was showing up under my arms and my voice had started deepening like a year before, so I didn't sound like a little kid anymore, yet not like a grown man either. My dick had reached its full 6 inches that I'd keep for the rest of my life. Like I said, after meeting Aaron I started working out mildly, so my muscles where starting to look defined. I was definitely not ripped, though. Altogether I think I looked good in my eyes.
The three of us started hanging out together shortly after Aaron moved, playing a lot of video games at Jordy's. Unlike Jordy, Aaron was very open about sex talk since the first day we met, when he was 12 and we were 11. He and I had jacked off together several times, although not each other. I got to see his cock since it started growing from 3.5 inches to the respectable 7 inches it was now, at his 15 years and 2 months old. I knew his body was mostly hairless, but he had light hairs on his arms and his calves, and a little happy trail leading down from his belly button. I think he'd tried to get Jordy to open up about this as well, but I'm sure he must have shied away from it. I'd never seen Jordy totally naked. I don't think anyone had.
So here we were, on the first day of school going into our freshman year, while Aaron was starting his sophomore year. Jordy and I felt blessed to have an older friend we could go to, just in case, with our usual fears of venturing into an unknown school with many older kids we didn't know.
It was also on this day that I first met Abby. She was starting her freshman year as well, but she came from a different middle school. She was 14, but was smaller than the other girls and boys in our class. However, she was already developed and her boobs looked big on her. I felt very attracted to her when I saw her for the first time in my third period English class.
Our sitting arrangment made it difficult to get to talk to her, since she was at the other end of the room, but I had a clear view of her and her beautiful dirty blonde hair. Jordy didn't share as many classes with me as I would have liked, seeing each other only for first and last period. I spent most of the class stealing glances at Abby even without knowing her name.
I just felt drawn to her and wanted to be close to her with all of my being. I had a dirty side to my mind, like everyone does since their teen years. At several points during class, my mind flashed me images of Abby naked, or what I pictured her to be naked anyway, me playing with her boobs, licking her pussy, or even her sitting on me, riding my cock. I felt my pants getting tighter every time, so I tried to shrug those images off my head to avoid being embarrassed.
As the class ended and I strolled to my next period Art class, I found Abby talking to some girls in the hallway. I looked at her as I walked by and, when she noticed me and looked directly at me I quickly moved my eyes away and blushed furiously, not before catching her smiling at my embarrassment. I didn't know what was happening to me, I'm not usually embarrassed by these things. But I was so caught up staring at her that it took me by surprise.
I looked at my feet and tried to find my way quickly to a classroom with a sign by the door: "Ms. Smith Art class". Once I arrived, there was no one there yet. So I picked a seat toward the back of the room. This room was pretty nice, with big tables that could sit 6 kids, with two long seats at either side of the table. It looked like a more comfortable version of a cafeteria. I sat there looking around, not being able to get Abby out of my head, when all of a sudden she bursts in the room. My first thought was that she'd been following me, for some reason, and wanted to make fun of me for blushing earlier.
"Knock, knock" she said smiling when she entered the room, loud enough that I would listen.
"Um... hi." I said, barely audible.
"Is this Ms. Smith Art class?" she said, although it was very obvious by the sign at the door that this was indeed the room.
"Yeah, that's what the sign says." I couldn't believe myself! I wanted with all my heart to be nice to this unknown, but beautiful girl, and all I could muster was some cynical comment. I wanted to crawl beneath the table and dig a hole right there and jump into it.
"Sorry I asked. You don't have an 'asshole' warning sign on you." she said, still smiling! She threw me off with that. Was she not mad at me? Was she teasing me? This poked me at my core and I felt like I had to pick up my jaw and come back with an answer quick. She kept on walking toward my table.
"You can't read anyway." came out of my mouth, and a small smile crept its way onto my face as I realized she was still smiling, now standing beside the table.
"Hi asshole! I'm Abby" she said, extending her hand for me to shake.
"Hi retard! I'm Ethan" I said, and then took her hand softly and held it for a bit too long. It was like our bodies were having a totally different conversation from the trash talk we gave each other.
"Can I sit here?" she asked. I suddenly felt at ease with her, and for once I kept myself from throwing more smart ass remarks at her.
"Please!" I replied, now fully smiling at her. She slid in the seat next to me. I smelled her perfume, mixed with her own scent, and it was something that would stick with me for, like, ever. "I suck at art, it's really not my thing." I explained to her.
"Well I love art, so I can help you not suck at it" she replied, while more kids were coming into the room and taking seats all over.
"Then I hope Ms. Smith doesn't rearrange our seats" I smiled at her. Two girls came to our table and sat across from us.
"Hi! I'm Ashley and this is Clara" one of them said, trying to be nice to us strangers.
"Hi! I'm Retard and this is Asshole!" Abby said, before breaking out in laughter. I laughed as well, since I found her introduction really amusing. The girls looked puzzled at first but then caught on and started giggling along with us. I looked at Abby while we were both still smiling and I felt warm all over. I was loving Art class already.
[June 6th, 2015 - Back to the present]
"Hey man" Aaron greeted me. We bumped our fists and gave each other a little hug as he came in and started for the living room.
"Hey, Jordy" I said, smiling at him, genuinely happy to see him. He had opened up a lot in the last few months and I found out a lot of things I didn't know about him. I felt much closer to him again, kind of like we were when we were little kids. I gave him a big hug and I couldn't help but smell his scent coming from his hair and neck.
"Hi Ethan, don't crush me" he joked as he hugged me back. I motioned for him to go into the living room and closed the entrance door.
Aaron and Abby were just releasing their hug, when Jordy came to her and greeted her with a warm hug as well.
"Hi Boo Boo!" that was Abby's nickname for Jordan. She said he reminded her of Boo Boo bear, which was somewhat accurate when I thought of it. He might have killed any other person who called him that. But at least he let me call him Jordy, since that's what everybody called him when we were little kids.
We all sat down on the living room couch.
"Were you guys alone?" Aaron asked.
"Yeah, as usual for Saturdays." I replied.
"Were you having fun?" Aaron continued, a tiny smile creeping its way to his face.
"I'll let you guess that." I said while smiling at him and Jordy.
Both guys looked to Abby, maybe trying to confirm what was already pretty obvious. She smiled openly and seductively, giggling at the attention. She shrugged, bringing her arms slightly closer, which raised her pert boobs.
"You eager dogs!" Aaron said, smiling broadly.
The couch was one of those "L" shaped sofas. I was sitting at the far left, Abby was to my right. Jordy was half lying, half sitting to her right. And Aaron was sitting at the "L" end of the sofa.
"Do you guys want anything to drink?" I asked, getting responses from all of them at the same time, unable to tell what they wanted. "Ok, soda for everyone."
I left for the kitchen to grab 4 sodas, trying to decide if they'd all be ok with a Coke. I decided to bring two Cokes and two Sprites, and maybe they'd share if they wanted.
When I walked back in the living room, Aaron had taken my spot on the couch and both he and Jordy were stroking Abby's belly and back. Jordy and Abby were kissing, making out actually.
I smiled when I saw this, as I figured sharing sodas was the last thing on their minds right now. My own cock thought the same apparently, as it quickly hardened, witnessing one of the hottest sights I'd seen up to that point in my life.
I walked over in front of Abby and grabbed her hands to pull her up so she was standing. She smiled at me and obliged. Both boys took the opportunity to remove their shirts and also stood up to either side of Abby. I started removing her tank top and she helped me take it all off.
There we stood, us boys surrounding a very aroused Abby, standing so close we were almost touching. She looked up and around at each of us, grinning. Jordy was about the same height as she was, at 5'7". I was a little taller at 5'10" and Aaron was the tallest at 6'1".
All three of us looked at each other and hugged around Abby, enclosing her in our embrace.
"I can feel all of your cocks, boys!" She giggled as she started rubbing the front of my and Jordy's pants. We pulled back a little and each of us started stroking her in a different part of her body. Aaron slid his hand inside the back of her shorts and started rubbing her ass. Jordy grabbed her right boob and squeezed it over her bra. I bent to kiss her mouth as I ventured my fingers down between her legs and started rubbing her pussy over her shorts.
She moaned at all the attention she was getting. I saw Jordy was kissing her neck to my left, smelling what I was certain was her delicious scent, his naked hairless chest rubbing her side. Aaron took her left boob and squeezed it as well. He seemed to be sliding his fingers in between her crack.
"Ohh, guys!" She moaned pulling apart from our kiss.
"Are you hot?" Aaron asked, and she promptly replied.
"God yes!" But I'm sure Aaron was asking all three of us. That put a smile on my face just as I noticed Aaron undoing his belt and zipper, ready to push his pants down and off his legs.
Jordy and I followed his lead, me taking off my shirt as well.
"Mmm" Abby moaned as she stroked each of our hairless chests, standing so close to her. She looked around at each of us in the eyes. She wasn't smiling anymore, her look was one of pure lust for our bodies. I looked around at the guys and saw the same look on their faces as they admired her curves.
She took Aaron and Jordy's cocks in her hands and Aaron put his hand on her left shoulder. She moaned lightly and then kneeled down between the three of us, before taking my cock once again in her soft, warm mouth.
I let out a quiet, deep moan as I felt my cock being enveloped and treated to a wet massage from her tongue and lips. She looked up at us and Jordy took her hair and tucked it behind her shoulders, holding it back in a pony tail of sorts. She pulled my cock out of her mouth and closed her eyes as she let out a loud moan.
"Ahhh... boys..." she trailed off as Jordy pushed his cock against her cheek and she switched to sucking his cock while grabbing me and Aaron. We heard a deep moan from Jordy.
She's come to love this scene. Three boys giving her our undivided attention and our cocks for her to play with. Once she had a taste, one cock wasn't enough for her anymore. She got crazy horny when we bossed her around. None of us felt judged by the others for what we liked, for who we were, and we were free to be ourselves among our group of friends. It was our essence.
This ends Chapter 1! Please drop me a line if you liked it or if you didn't. I'd really appreciate some feedback.
B