Raven

By Cailen Vature

Published on Nov 8, 2023

Gay

PLEASE READ THESE DISCLAIMERS:

This story is a very long work of gay erotic science fiction. There are some scenes of man on man action but it will not be a dominating factor in this story. So if you are looking for something to get off to you might as well turn around now.

The names and places in this story are entirely fictitious, any relation to persons or events are entirely coincidental. HOWEVER: they are based off of real places and events to make the story seem more plausible.

If you are underage, or this is illegal where you are, then please do the right thing... (Whatever that may be...)

This story is copyrighted, ©2010. To me the author and it is therefore illegal to copy or use any part of this story without my written permission.

Which leads me to: If you have any desire to get in contact with me for comments, directions to a good Beta, pictures, or music relating to the story, or for permission to use my story (for lord only knows what...) You may contact me at my email address: cailenauthor@yahoo.com

Thank you: Cailen

Part 3: Roche Radius

A dream the child is enraptured Within its mind the child captured The child dreams of a safe haven The darkness doth send him a Raven The darkness fades the shadow keeps Till the morn the child sleeps

Chapter 21: Falling back to Earth

It was cold outside and I could see my breath rising into the air. The stars were out in force shining their bright kaleidoscope; they seemed brighter than usual because the moon was just a sliver crescent in the night sky. I gazed up at them just as I had countless times before.

Many a time I had come out with a blanket just like I had tonight and gazed up at them, and thought `what a lonely world we must be...' but tonight it was different and they shined for me and I sat admiring their beauty.

"They really are something aren't they?"

I looked to my right and gazed at Jay who was leaning against my rock with me. His eyes dazzled with the sparkles of a million stars behind them making them shimmer in the darkness. My arms were wrapped around him keeping them warm against the cool night air

"I always come out and watch the stars" I answered

"They are something" Jay said giving out a sigh of contentment

"They're so bright tonight" I commented

"You see the moon?" Jay asked

"Yeah it's just a tiny crescent" I said

"You know what's that's called?" he asked me turning his head to face me giving me a soft smile.

"A crescent moon?" I asked

"The moon is just moments away from becoming a new moon which it will be for only a few moments until it is a crescent again, that crescent where the moon is nothing but a broken line. Those beads of broken light, they are called `saber's beads.'

"I didn't know that" I said looking up at the moon.

"There is a very old story that talks about the `saber's beads'" Jay said giving me a smile and I nodded for him to continue

"A long long time ago man lived peacefully, there was no hate, no lies, and it was a time when everyone was a brother. Then one day a great king from a distant land came and said `I am greatest of thee, all that ye own shall belong to me.' The great king took land, food, and even the lives of his people and soon death flowed so greatly that heaven itself burst open."

"What happened?" I asked

"God himself came and struck down the king casting him forever from the land but peace has never returned and heaven will forever be too full. So the legends say on the night of the new moon with the last fading light souls trapped on earth may go to heaven, and souls in heaven wanting to return to earth may come back with the first light after the new moon"

As if god had heard the story I watched with amazement as the light from the moon faded to total darkness and then the first lights from the waxing moon appeared.

"They have returned" Jay said watching the light

I felt a cold shiver run down my spine as if the story had real meaning and it touched me deep inside.

"Are you cold?" Jay asked me

"Yea" I lied

"Let's go inside then where it's warm"

We went back inside and found the downstairs deserted as it appeared my parents retreated to their room for the night. We sat on the couch in front of the TV and Jay pulled a couple of beers from the cooler.

"Gratz on a great job!" Jay said holding up his beer

"Thanks" I said rising up mine.

We clinked our bottles together in salute, and proceeded to chug them down. I felt the malt coolness run down my throat and then the slight sting from the alcohol. He handed me another beer and raised his in salute.

"Will you be my boyfriend?" Jay asked me suddenly and my bottle froze in mid air.

I froze for a moment

"I thought we were dating?" I asked

"Well you never officially answered, so..." Jay blushed slightly "I was wondering if you wanted to be my boyfriend, my steady boyfriend" he said

I looked into his eyes, their emerald green depths pulling me in and I leaned in and our lips brushed in a gentle kiss

"Yes" I said

"Good" he smiled and gave me another kiss

I leaned into him and he wrapped his arms around me into a tight hug.

"Want to dance?" I asked

"Here?" Jay asked "didn't you get enough earlier?"

"Nope" I smiled

"Who am I to refuse?" he said getting up offering me hand and pulled me up.

"Thanks" I walked over to the stereo and found a local radio station and turned it up to a respectable level but not too loud for my parents.

He grabbed me from behind and we started dancing. But this dancing was a lot different than our dancing at the school. He stood behind me and I felt his breath on my neck as he placed gentle kisses around my neck and behind me ear. His hands were roaming around my chest and one hand found its way under my shirt and the other to the front of my pants. I felt myself getting instantly hard to his ministrations.

I gyrated my hips in motion to the music and we flowed together like water and this dancing felt more erotic than anything than I had ever experienced before. I moved up and down and I felt his shaft hard against my backside and I rubbed it with the movement of my hips to the music as if in a trance.

The song ended and a slower song came on and Jay turned me around to face him. He wrapped his arms around me and held me tightly. He then leaned back enough to look me in the eyes. He suddenly opened his mouth and started singing and like magic the room dissolved away and the world disappeared and there was only him and me and his angelic voice. It was just like the trance I used when swimming but felt entirely different in his arms.

In every heart there is a room, a sanctuary safe and strong To heal the wounds from lovers past, until a new one comes along I spoke to you in cautious tones; you answered me with no pretense And still I feel I said too much my silence is my self defense

And every time I've held a rose it seems I only felt the thorns And so it goes, and so it goes and so will you soon I suppose But if my silence made you leave, then that would be my worst mistake So I will share this room with you and you can have this heart to break

A chorus broke through and Jay swung me around in a circle and kissed me and whispered in my ear

"Billy Joel: `And so it goes.' Great song" he then went back to singing for me.

And this is why my eyes are closed It's just as well for all I've seen And so it goes, and so it goes and you're the only one who knows So I would choose to be with you that's if the choice were mine to make But you can make decisions too and you can have this heart to break

And so it goes, and so it goes and you're the only one who knows

With his last note the world came back into view and I felt the tears in my eyes and he leaned down and gave me a gentle kiss.

The kiss soon became much more than that as I began to kiss back in earnest. The passion behind the kiss left me staggering and I soon forgot to breathe and found myself pulling away gasping for air.

"You alright?" he asked me a little concerned

"Jackson I... I didn't know you could sing" I said

"I'm sorry" he said "I'm not really good but I thought you'd like me to..." he said but I interrupted him

"Are you kidding you were amazing!" I said "it was like you reached right into me... I...I..." I stammered and settled for launching myself into his arms causing him to lose his balance causing us to topple onto the couch.

I landed on top of him and cushioned my impact by planting my arms on either side of his head. I felt him push up to kiss me and I felt his hands snake around my sides and start lifting up my shirt. I leaned back enough to pull my shirt off and leaned back down and stared kissing him again. Our hips ground together and my erection ached to be released.

Jay pushed himself forward knocking me back so that he was sitting up and I was still on his lap but leaning back on the couch with my arms behind me. He pulled off his shirt and then reached forward and unbuckled my pants, and in one swift motion removed both the football pants and jock I was wearing freeing my cock causing it to hit my belly with a soft slap.

Jay shot me a wicked grin and unbuckled his own pants. I took that moment to get off his lap and help him but I felt him grab my arm and I looked up into his eyes

"No" he said softly

I stopped as he removed his pants to his boxer briefs and then he pulled me so I was kneeling on the couch facing outwards to the TV. He got down on his knees in front of me.

`Holy shit he's going to suck me' I thought

"You want me to suck you?" he asked out loud almost making me cough. I could swear he could read my mind.

"You... you don't... have to su..." I didn't get anymore words out before he leaned in and pulled the whole thing into his mouth. I felt his throat swallow pulling me deeper until I felt his chin rest against my sack. His arms wrapped themselves around my thighs and his hands wrapped themselves around my butt and I felt him pull me even deeper into his face.

For a moment it was hard to tell who was fucking who as he squeezed my ass with my whole cock rammed deep down his throat.

"Yea..." I moaned "suck that cock"

He pulled back only to take the whole length of it again and he was bobbing his head up in down in a fervor. He moaned almost in time with me sending vibrations down my shaft and it didn't take too long before I felt my balls beginning to swell.

"Jay I'm close..." I said trying to give him ample warning to pull away but instead he just latched on tighter and suddenly I felt one of his hands that was holding my ass snake it's way to my hole and I felt him push on the outside of my hole and then I felt his knuckle break through and that was all it took for my prostate to burst and I felt the cum pulsate around his finger and down my shaft and then pump it's way till it bust out my cock and down Jay's throat.

"Oh god" I moaned as volley after volley of cum burst into Jay's mouth and despite him swallowing feverishly I felt my cum leak out of his mouth and down his chin.

I felt my orgasm subside and he slowly pulled away and my cock flopped out of his mouth in a sticky mess. I looked down and saw the cum running over his chin and it had to be the most erotic thing I'd ever seen and he slowly rose up and we kissed and I felt my taste in his mouth and it was amazing.

"You need to wipe up" I said pulling a glob off his chin

He simply took my finger with the proffered semen and just stuck the whole digit into his mouth with a smile, then slowly withdrawing the unit slowly.

"Thanks" he said giving me a smirk

"Your turn?" I asked reaching down feeling his erection through his boxer briefs

"Actually I want to lay down on this couch with you and watch a movie or something" he said.

I lay down on the couch and he crawled over and shimmied behind me then wrapped his arms around me and pulled the blanket over us.

I guess we never got around to the movie because with his arms wrapped around me holding me tight I fell asleep the moment my head hit the pillow.


I Promised myself when I started writing this story I'd try to stay away from putting lyrics of songs into my work, but I blew that to hell with this chapter. Thankfully I promise that this is the only time it happens.

Next: Chapter 22


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