I'd like to get feedback, preferably on my writing but anything works.
Email ploy.agora (at) yahoo.se. I'm still trying to become a writer so please. (And curse you all who roam the internet for emails to blatantly add to unwanted SPAMlists, bot or not!)
I'm still in the process of writing these parts. You can read all parts seperately, though I'll sometimes refer to things written or described earlier.
Actually I'm a bit sorry for not updating in a long time but life has happened. More will come but probably not regurlarly.
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Slowly coming to life on the davenport I felt good. It was quiet out here. Far away from the city. Fom home. It made me feel a bit alienated. I guess the sudden and total difference between a major city and the countryside sometimes can be behind such feelings. Or being in a new place I've never been before. Anyways, I also felt spent. Not so much hungover anymore, but just finished. Having a naked 19-year-old next to me made me feel a bit old - and alive at the same time. And happy. Finished and happy. And in need of good long relief of the bladder.
I got up and out. Naked, of course. Elvis studied me still tired from the hour-long walk. They were both okay. I needed a bath and felt spent. Sexually and physically. Not much could get me going now. The effects of last night had worn off, except for my body still feeding back feelings of waryness. Mixed with the the sex I had experienced the last 24 hours totalled into a good satasfied feeling. Coming back I figured I should take the dogs for a walk. A short walk would be enough. The dogs seemed to agree.
Reentering the cabin I found Morgan jerking off. His face was all lust and I-don't-give-a-fuck. He just continued and I enjoyed the scene. Surely he had heard me coming back and was not surprised by me entering. I took in his body with my eyes. Pretty much as mine. Not much hair to be seen anywhere on his body. Outlines of biceps, lower arms and a sixpack could be seen. This guy could turn out a viral picturefantasy if ce cared. Morgans dick was hard, slippery and being jerked slowly while his other hand massaged his balls. I was to spent to care a lot but I felt the familiar stir around my dick.
He breathed heavily. And looked at me. -A stripshow would help. My mind went blank for two seconds and his attention went back to his own body. 'Yeah. What the fuck. Why not?' I felt a little bad for not being on his level, but mostly it felt empowering. I could tease him however I wanted. I was in charge. And no one else could see out here. 'Well, if I'll do it, I'll do it good.'
I decided to give this kid the best show in the state. I rummaged through my stuff, found my shorts, put'em on and picked up two clementines. I walked over to the short side of the davenport, turned away from him and put the clementines out of his sight on the floor. I arched back letting my dreads hang straight down and started to move my hips slowly. My hands went slowly up my sides eventually resting on my hips just above the shorts. I let out a deep moan.
I started to dance to get Morgan really going and from the sound coming from behind me it seemed to work. I bent forward while teasingly lowering one side of my shorts. I still moved my hips while going back up carressing my body with my hands. I threw my head around locking my eyes with his as I let my body slowly follow as one hand found my nipple and the other my inner thigh. Morgan enjoyed it, never missing an inch of my body as his hands worked his dick and balls.
I put one knee on the davenport next to Morgans foot opening up my groin for him. Still slowly rocking my hips I leant forward while now sucking on one finger and sticking the other hand inside my shorts. This felt hot and I could see Morgans dick was rock hard. I let my wet finger fall on to his thigh and then sliding upwards. I used the other hand as support while I leaned forward and ran my finger close but past his hands and dick, up over his tensed abdominal muscles and to his nipple. I let it circle there before I put it in my mouth again and licked it wet once more. Returning it straight to the nipple made him groan and close his eyes. I ran it up towards his neck, over it, the chin and towards his lips. I let it rest there for a few seconds.
He stuck out his tounge to get a taste, but just before making contact I withdrew. I ran my finger slowly, back, down over his nipple, stomach and passed his dick. His eyes were still cloed, his entire body in a state of excitement. High exticement. Still with one knee on the davenport I stood and arched back I ran my hands over my upper body. Rhytmically going up and down with my hands I also pushed my shorts just a little lower and lower while slowly turning. Eventually I was facing away from him and my crack was now partly visible. I bent all the way forward and pulled my shorts all the way down. I picked up the clementines before neatly stepping out of the shorts.
I put one foot on the davenport preparing to crawl backwards towards him. I could hear him jerking his dick frantically. -You want this, don't you? I teased him. -Oh yes. I want you all over me. I arched my back and crawled backwards in the davenport. I knew now his dick was inches from my ass. While on my knees, still rocking my hips slowly I let one of the clementines down my back. It gained enough speed to roll over my asscheeks. It fell between Morgans legs. Morgan let out a loud groan while I carressed my side with the other hand also touching his leg.
-Fuck Yeah, Nathan. Fuck yeah... I didn't have to look back to know the expression on his face, the hormones running through his body. I repeated with the second clementine. Then I crawled a little closer to Morgan. He grabbed my hip and pulled me towards him and I willingly pressed towards him. His dick, still being jerked, repeatedly touched my asscheeks. I could feel the precum being smeared onto my asscheeks. I caught some of it with a finger a brought to my mouth. -Mmm. Give me more... -I'm gonna cum! -Yeah, do that. Shoot that load, sexy. I want it! I continued to slowly rock my hips. He jerked off with a few more strokes before he let go and pressed his dick against me. I could feel his dick pulsating and we moaned in tandem. He shot several warm squirts of cum over my back, ass and his own dick. I could feel the warm sperm runng down my side, my asscheeks and the inside of my ass.
Calming down I started to lean forward and eventually I collapsed on his legs. Evetnually he crwaled out and got up, found some papertowels and dried himself off. Then returned to me, thanked me and dried me off. He threw the paper on the floor and lied down next to me. -Want a clementine?