Score!

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Here's a story I wrote for Sapphire's contest called Coming Apart..........

Coming Apart: Score!

Travis Fenner dribbled down court as the clock ran down, he was a rookie guard for the Dallas Wranglers and this was the game he'd waited for. He'd finally been able to start after the veteran that had the job had been injured. Now as the clock ticked towards zero he had a chance to win the game himself!

He saw his wife in the front row as he dribbled past, she'd come to the game with some of her friends again it seemed. Then he saw the blonde cheerleader smiling at him, her lush body revealed by the tiny uniform she wore. His attention wandered as he stopped and the man guarding him knocked the ball away and raced to the other basket, dunking emphatically to put the game away.

"Don't play with a wandering eye kid!", the other player laughed while walking past, "There's plenty of time for that later on!".

"Fuck you!", Travis snapped.

Jennifer Fenner frowned at her husband, she'd seen his eyes wander to the buxom blonde cheerleader. She'd long suspected that he cheated on her, now as he brushed past her towards the locker room she smacked the chair in rage.

"I told you Jen, now you see firsthand....he only wants a piece of ass, he cost us the game with his moronic lust!", her friend Trina growled.

"Indeed Jennifer, as one of the coven you will benefit from the spell as much as anyone.", the head of the coven, an older woman named Melissa , mused while standing.

"But...what about his career?", Jennifer sighed...then realized what she was doing....defending the bastard...rationalizing his ways....just as she always had.

"I can see it Jen, you're sick of him....sick of the way he's treated you.", Trina said.

She watched Travis pat the cheerleader on her ass and frowned, "You're right......let's do it.".

Travis threw his jersey into the locker with a snarl as his teammates walked past, each snapping at him for his stupidity. He glared at them, all a bunch of old men hanging on to my game, he thought. They all had wives like he did but these fools actually turned down the babes that constantly approached them.

"Way to go asshole!", Freddy Howard growled while walking out of the shower, "If you wouldn't be such a shit and just go home to that pretty wife of yours we'd win a lot more often!".

Travis dressed quickly and left in a hurry, meeting the cheerleader.....that he now knew was named Jill.

"Travis, I thought you were married.", the woman asked with a frown, "I'm not some bimbo that you can just screw.".

"Me and Jennifer are getting divorced Jill. Besides I told you I could get you a try-out with the Miami Rage for next year's Women's League.", he said with a smirk.

"I......", she started.

"Listen, do you want to play hoops or just shake your ass every night!?", Travis snapped.

Jill sighed, she would do anything to play basketball like this little jerk. She wasn't a virgin by any means but this just made her ill....what was she doing...was it worth....this?

Jennifer walked around the cauldron as her coven sisters followed. They chanted in unison, preparing the spell for use upon their husbands. Should any of their men make love to another woman they would be knocked into a coma and their mind would swap with the mind of their lover.

She looked around, many of these women had nothing to worry about...their husbands were good men who wouldn't even think of screwing around. She saw Nina Howard, Freddy's wife, and sighed...she only wished that she'd married a guy as good as Freddy. The guy was a millionaire but still treated his wife as he had when they'd been in love in high school.

She smiled as the leader handed her a vial from the cauldron.......it was the only thing that could reverse the mind-swap that would claim the unfaithful.

Travis smiled at the naked blonde before him, Jill might not be the bimbo he wished but she had a body that put his wife's to shame. She had firm 36C breasts and round sweeping hips. She could pose for Playboy with that kind of body he mused.

Jill was nervous as she stood naked before Travis, she'd never made love FOR something before...she almost felt like a prostitute. But to actually play in the big leagues....she'd always dreamed of it.

Travis slid into her warm slit with a grin....then something happened.....he felt a surge go through his mind and his body seemed to spasm even as his mind....snapped.

When the pain cleared he opened his eyes....and saw his own face inches from him! Then he felt it......something sticking into his groin!

He screamed in horror as he felt the stiff penis that had been his own inside his pussy. As soon as he heard his new voice he realized that he was somehow...Jill!

"Jesus....Jesus....must be a dream...got to be...can't be happening!", he sobbed in his high soprano while trying to push his own male form off of him.

As he struggled to move the man atop of his female form the penis inside of his slit was sliding inside his cleft...God it felt so big! He felt his chest jiggling as he scrambled to free himself....36C's were great on Jill.....but now HE was Jill...they felt so heavy on his chest...and every time one of the nipples brushed against the male chest atop of him he felt a tingle of pleasure.

He finally pushed the man off and was stunned to see his own body fall almost lifelessly to the floor.

"Oh God! My body's dead!", he screamed....who could he turn to now......looking like this!?

He had to get out....get home, Jennifer was his only hope to help him. He grabbed the jeans and sweatshirt that Jill had worn, ignoring her bra and panties as he dressed. He looked at his body on the floor, breathing but seemingly dead to the world.....he had to get out.....would someone think he'd done that to Jill....his own body!?

He raced to his Jeep sitting outside, his large breasts bouncing wildly...and painfully. He saw a guy staring at him and his first thought was to tell the guy to fuck off.....then he remembered...he was a woman......God did that guy want to have sex with him. He could see the man's eyes glued to his boobs.

Travis started the Jeep then saw his new face in the rear-view mirror.....was this really happening!? Instead of the ebon skinned male face he'd seen his whole life it was a gorgeous...and white woman's face looking back. His blonde hair was slicked to the side of his head by the sweat from their brief sexual encounter.

He pulled to a stop light and heard a guy whistle, "Hey sexy...come one over here!".

A man was leering at him from the sidewalk...his braless breasts again the center of the man's attention. He blushed in embarrassment...he was being stared at like a piece of meat.

He pulled into the drive of his home and raced to the door, he still couldn't believe that these tits bouncing around were his!

He ripped open the door and screamed, "Jenny! God Jenny please be home!".

"I'm here.....Travis.", his wife said from the front room.

His jaw dropped, "How.....how could you know!?".

"Oh I figured you'd end up in that white bitch's body....how does it feel....those boobs have got to be 36C or so...and you're not even a virgin! How did it feel to have that dick sticking into your pussy? Was it worth it Travis...was she good enough that BECOMING her was worth it!?", Jennifer snapped.

"You....you did this...how? Change me back bitch!", he screamed in a high screech.

Jennifer caught the small fist of the blonde white woman in her own. She now was at least two inches taller than Travis and much stronger.

She decked her husband then ripped open the shirt he wore. Travis' big breasts were revealed, the fat red nipples swelled as his wife lowered herself onto him.

"I could have given you the reversal potion.....but I knew you'd never change. It's all over Travis.......I think you'll like my new husband.

Travis looked up in horror as his own body walked in with Jill inside.

"Hello Travis, it seems you did keep your word. I will get to play basketball in the big leagues because I fucked you. Jennifer followed us and while you raced all over town in panic she gave me the potion to awaken me in your body. As we drove here we agreed.....it's better for all of us if I stay in your body. Jennifer doesn't want to have to worry about her husband being a dog like you....now I'll admit it might be hard to be a black man for a while...I really haven't got a lot of experience you know!", she laughed.

"Please.....I'm sorry......don't leave me like this!", Travis sobbed.

Jennifer knelt to her husband and hugged her, "We're not going to throw you out honey. I still love you...God help me I do.....but you'll never be a man again. I'm sorry but I can't live like that......you don't leave me any choice.

Travis sobbed on his wife's shoulder then passed out.......the horror of his new situation hitting his male mind.

Two years later----Miami

Jennifer Fenner watched the buxom blonde point guard for the Miami Rage dribble up court with time running out. The woman had become the leader of her team since joining them last year. She didn't score much but was the best passer in the league and everyone considered her a great person to boot.

"Shoot Jill!", the tall black man with Jennifer yelled. He'd been signing autographs all night, after all it wasn't often that an All-Star like Travis Fenner showed up in public.

Jill Dorsey looked at the clock and then spun about a pick and let fly......swish! The ball flew through the net easily, ensuring the Rage of the championship.

Jill smiled as her teammates carried her to the locker room, she saw her wife Jenny laughing and clapping wildly with Travis and grinned, they'd all come a long way.

Jennifer Fenner blew her husband a kiss as her teammates carried her about the gym. Who'd have thought that trapping Travis in a gorgeous woman's body would make him a better husband!

Eddie Glover

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