This is chapter 3 of my first attempt at erotic fiction. Please let me know what you think, it is important to me.
amandagirlwriter@yahoo.com
All people in the story are fictional and please do not continue if you are under 18 or if the theme of sex, and a lil raunch, between girls would offend you. (f/f ws, smells, toots)
Catch up: The night before Ashley and Cindy took their taboo, dirty secrets a step further by actually tasting each other, in a not so clean state, for the first time.
It's the following Monday and Ashley and Cindy are the last ones remaining in the locker room after volleyball practice. Both girls are covered in sweat.
Cindy says, "Coach Hobbs sure did run our butts off in practice today. We better not lose another game."
Ashley replies, "Isn't that the truth."
Ashley looks both ways, making sure they are alone and leans over to Cindy. "Oh Cindy you smell so good."
"I do?" asks Cindy. She then lifts her arm smelling at the smooth pale space, mmmm. "I'm so rank."
Ashley lifts her friends arm, and excitedly says, "ewww you are". But she remains there rubbing her tight volley ball shorts into her mound, as Cindy smells her own left pit and Ashley the right.
They break from this funky day dream and go to the community girls shower room. It has tiled half-walls at each shower bay that go up only about 3 feet, giving one a sense of privacy from the waist down at least. Ashley and Cindy prefer the stalls directly across from each other which meant they could look at each other, unobstructed. The two girls go about their business of washing their hair and lathering up their firm slender bodies when Cindy calls out, "Ash, looky!"
As Cindy is washing her hair she places her feet at shoulders width and tilts her hips upward and starts to pee out in a beautiful arch. Ashley's mouth drops open and tries to do the same but because of her lovely redundant labia minora (think big) she just sputters all over herself and down her legs which Cindy thinks is just as sexy.
Back at their lockers they dry off and start to redress. Cindy says, "I can't believe we are still wearing the same panties since Friday. Look how dirty mine are?"
As Cindy holds them wide, Ashley looks and says, "OMG, you might as well be wearing a diaper!" Both girls giggle and one by one pull up the heavy, canvas-like crotch of their used panties, letting out lil gasps as they feel the muck touch their teen cunnies.
Both girls spray a bit of vanilla body spray on the outside of their panties just to make sure it stays their secret. They leave the locker room, give each other hugs and go about their day and boring classes.
Later, Cindy gets to spend the night at Ashley's and they can't resist and are under the covers, smelling each others panties and masturbating each other. Cindy looks over at her best friend and says "Ohhhh". Ashley has the panties attached to her face, with the leg holes pinned behind her ears which frees up her hands... Cindy follows suit and does that too, placing the crotch right over her nose and mouth. Both girls look at each other, panting, moaning and cum together and no longer feeling silly or dirty, but so thankful to have met each other.
They come down and toss the undies onto Ashley's cluttered floor, and, of course, don't clean up their girl cum. They continue their presleep girl talk then Cindy sits up.
Ashley admits, "I sooo need to toot". The both get quiet and then hear a strong but muffled "Rrrrrp". She pulls the covers over both their heads as they both nearly hyperventilate smelling the acrid pungent girl toot. Coming out of the make shift toot-tent, Cindy says she has to fart too. Her face contorts but Ashley interrupts her "No not yet! I have an idea" Cindy knew is had to be good because Ashley was already blushing....
Sheepishly, Ashley tells Cindy that she's always wondered what her anus looked like when she toots. Cindy enthusiastically concurred.
"Well, then. Could I look between your cheeks when you fart?" looking down embarrassed.
Cindy replies, "Oh god, are you serious? Ashley blushes more and wishes she didn't say anything. But Cindy says of course you can but u better describe it to me sweetie...
Both girls already naked get on top of the covers as Cindy gets on her knees and elbows, her head pressed into the pillows, crooked back to see. Ashley gets behind her and holds Cindy's cheeks gently but effectively apart. She sees anus trying to push, throbbing, then it opens into a tiny cute slit and "FFFFFTTPP" she is quite literally blown away by the most sensual thing she has ever experienced. Her friend's anus, the opening, the sound, and that lovely pungent dirty air. It was all too much and without touching, her cunny spasmed with a mini orgasm.
Ashley falls back on the bed beside her young kinky lover, stunned and glassy eyed.
Cindy pokes her ribs, "Well, how was it? Tell me tell me."
Ashley gathers her thoughts..."Oh Cindy that was beautiful, your butt hole kept pooching out then it opened to a tiny lil slit and not big like I thought it would, then it vibrated and made that wonderful sound and it smelled sooo fresh, so much like "You""
The diminutive Cindy snuggles up to Ashley saying "Oh I love you!" and they drift off to sleep cuddled together.
Please write me with your reactions or ideas, kiss
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