Tell me what you think of this story and how I can improve it. This story is about you and me hooking up.
I met you online and we talked for a while. You said you live close, maybe a mile. You told me to shower and get myself clean and not to forget my ass, if you know what I mean. You gave me your address and to be there at eight, You told me to hurry and better not be late. I rushed in the bathroom to clean my hole, Then I started to wonder, how big is your pole. I jumped in the shower and washed really fast, Then I wondered how long this will last. I looked at the clock and it's quarter to eight, now I know, i will be late. I sent you an email saying I am leaving now, I told you I'm sorry and I'll make it up some how. You told me to hurry and to stop fucking around, And for being late, I am just an ass to pound. I showed up at your place about quarter past eight, and once again you told me i'm late. You told me to come in and strip right down, because we aint got time to be fucking around. I removed my clothes and put them on a chair, I told you I have to piss, but you don't care. You removed your clothes and threw them on the floor, You grabbed my neck, and called me a whore. You pulled me down so i'm facing your cock, It's a good size and hard as a rock. You slide in my mouth and I start to gag, You told me your using me because your girls on the rag. I reached around to feel your butt, You slapped my face and call me a slut. I told you I had to piss real bad, You told me to hurry because your getting mad. You told me to crawl and stay on my knees, You remind me again, I am there to please. I crawled to the bathroom and let my piss flow, You walked up behind me and call me a ho. You pushed my head down and held me tight, You held me so hard, I couldn't fight. You slapped my ass hard till it got sore, You rubbed my hole and called me whore. You asked me if my pussy is clean as can be, I told you I douched so it is to me. You told me to stay put and keep my ass in the air, I told you my ass hurts but you don't care. You poured some lube right on my hole, Getting it wet was your only goal. I told you I was scared and wanted to run, But you held me tight and said it's time for some fun. You slid your cock in with all your might, You called me a cocksucker and said don't put up a fight. You were all the way in and didn't move, You told me you had something to prove. I started thinking, what did I miss. Then I felt you starting to piss. You pulled your cock out and called me a whore, You left the bathroom and shut the door. I sat on the toilet and wiped myself clean, I started thinking, why are you so mean. when I was done, I opened the door, Just to hear you say, i'm in here whore. I walked into the bedroom and you were stroking your cock. I was amazed it was hard as a rock. You were watching a porn on the tube, you threw me a dildo and a bottle of lube. You told me to get my ass on the floor, And to use the dildo like a good whore. I layed on my back with my ass towards you, So you can watch and tell me what to do. I slid the dildo in and started to go slow, You laughed at me and call me a fucking ho. You told me to go faster with all my might, You told me my pussy is too fucking tight. You told me to stop and lay facing the floor, You told me you will show me how to fuck a whore. You laid on top of me while holding me tight, You shoved your cock in with all your might. I started to scream and told you it hurt, I asked you why your treating me like dirt. You were laughing and fucking some more, You then told me this is how you treat a whore. You pulled your cock out and I thought we would rest, But you flipped me over and sat on my chest. You stroked your cock and aimed at my face, I wanted to stop you, just in case. I tried to move my arms, but they were stuck, Thats when I realized I was out of luck. You started stroking with all your might, I gave up on putting up a fight. You started shooting all over my face, You started laughing say I was a disgrace. You rubbed your cock all over the cum, You told me to get ready to eat some. You told me to suck your dick while I stroke, Just be careful you don't choke. I started stoking and ready to shoot my cum, You looked down and asked if I want some. As I started shooting, you told me to kiss, Thats when I felt you were starting to piss. I tried to move, to get out of the way, You laughed at me and said thats for being gay.
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