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The Wrong Twin - Chapter Nine: The Code
Written From Isaac's Perspective
"Come on Mackenzie, let's dance the night away," I said as we joined my friends back on the dance floor. I really needed a distraction to keep what I just saw between Jordan and Kayden off my mind.
Fortunately, some rap song came on. It was perfect for grinding, and just what I was looking for to get a boy off my mind. I grabbed Mackenzie by the waist and took her out on the floor.
"Isaac get your hands off my ass right now," Mackenzie said with force as we grinded nice and close. I pretended not to hear her, but she didn't fall for it.
"Isaac, now. Don't act like you didn't hear me. Get your fucking hands off my ass now. We are not getting sexual here," she continued. I, again, did not move my hands. I was in a zone here. I wanted in her pants. I needed sex. Don't ask me why, I guess that was my hormones talking. Sex seemed like the best way to get Kayden off my mind.
"Listen up here, dickhead, just because your crush doesn't like you back doesn't mean you get to be an asshole!" Mackenzie yelled at me before storming off.
Maria and Dylan saw the encounter, and Maria took off after Mack, while Dylan escorted me off the dance floor towards the bar. We each got ourselves a coke before heading over to where the tables were set up.
"Dude what the fuck was that about?" Dylan prodded.
"What? Mackenzie thought I was getting in her business or something. I don't know, ask her," I replied in a testy tone. I knew I shouldn't be acting this way, but I was still a little pissed about the whole Kayden and Jordan thing.
"So are you going to be an ass to Kyler now too?" Dylan asked after a minute or two of silence. I just looked at him funny. He could tell that I obviously wasn't following where he was going with this.
"Well you have been a `dickhead' to Mackenzie and now me. I can only assume that Kyler is next, since he is the one with your crush right?" He continued.
That's when it dawned on me. He thought I was acting like an ass because I was pissed that Annie had come to the dance with Kyler instead of me.
"Oh, no umm he has nothing to worry about. I mean Annie made her choice and I will just have to accept it," I replied, hoping that I wasn't giving anything away by my little stutter. Dylan is smart, and he is my best friend, but I am just not ready for anyone else to know about my possible feelings for Kayden.
"Now that's the level-heading thinking I expect out of you Isaac. Much better! Now go find Mackenzie and apologize to her," Dylan instructed. "Sex is not a good way to get over a crush. Trust me, I have tried it. You will just burn a bridge with a good friend."
I don't remember telling him that I wanted to have sex with Mackenzie to help get over my crush. I was quite impressed that he figured that out on his own. It also made me realize that I would have to be extra careful around Dylan because he may be able to figure out something was different about me.
"Thanks for the advice bro, I really needed this," I said as I stood up. "Now I will go find Mackenzie and apologize."
It took me a minute or two, but I found Maria and Mackenzie talking on the other side of the gym. I had no doubt that this was not going to be easy, but I knew I didn't have a choice. I had no right to try and use Mackenzie to get Kayden off of my mind.
"Mack, can I talk to you for a second?" I asked, looking down at the ground. I have trouble making eye contact when I know I was wrong.
"I will just leave you two alone," Maria said as she walked in the direction I came from, where Dylan was standing and waiting for her.
"Your ass better be here to apologize Mr. Taylor, otherwise I don't really care what you have to say.
Maria said I could spend the night at her house if I wanted to," Mack lectured.
"That won't be necessary Mack. I am here to apologize. I was acting like a total dickhead. I had no right to try and get sex out of you just to get my crush off of my mind. That was wrong and totally not me.
You know me better than that, I just wasn't thinking," I admitted. I tried to look her in the eye throughout this conversation, but I just couldn't. I felt like a complete asshole. I never do shit like this.
"Yeah I know you aren't like this normally Iz. Don't worry about it. Just don't let it happen again or I promise you, you won't have children ever," she threatened. I believed her.
After that, it was time to head over to Kyler's. Since it was pretty cool out, I decided to leave the top closed on the Ferrari. I have no doubt that Mackenzie would have bitched about being cold the entire trip to Kyler's. On the way, however, she decided that it was a good idea to talk about what happened at the dance between us.
"So why were you acting like that?" Mackenzie prodded. "I mean I get the whole `My crush doesn't like me so I want to have sex and forget about him' thing, but why were you angry almost?"
"Well, I guess I should be honest. Jordan and I didn't just workout when I met the first time," I revealed.
"What does that mean?"
"We, umm, kinda....fooled around a little bit in the locker room after our session on the ice."
"You did what?!?!?!"
"Calm down Mack! I was having an off day on the ice. I couldn't hit a target on the sniper drill to save my life. Jordan asked what was going on with me, and I proceeded to tell him about my kiss with Kayden the night before. He then came out to me, and after our workout we kinda jacked each other off in the locker room showers."
"Wow, that's umm, kinda hot."
"OH MY GOD MACK!"
"What?!?!?! You and Jordan are both hot! What can I say?"
"Hahahaha you are such a little perv!"
"At least I didn't just randomly jack off a boy in the showers!"
"Touche, hahaha."
"Wait a minute, you told Jordan that you might have feelings for Kayden, and yet he still hit on Kayden?"
Mackenzie asked after a minute or two of us laughing.
"Now ya see why I was pissed off?" I replied.
"Yeah, now I kinda get it. Wow was that a dick move on Jordan's part."
"Yes, yes it was. I mean I know that me and Jordan aren't like even friends or anything, but if some random person would tell you that they like someone, would you really go after them?" I asked rhetorically. "At the very least, he should have texted me real quick and asked if I would be ok with that.
Or to even ask if it was the same Kayden or whatever. I am incredibly disappointed with Jordan. He seemed like a cool guy, but now I just think he is an asshole."
"Well that, and he has a reputation for being kind of a manwhore," Mackenzie informed me.
"Excuse me?"
"Yeah, Jordan has slept with pretty much every gay guy in southern Orange County. I know he has been through all of the gay guys in Irvine, and most of the boys in the Laguna Hills area too."
"Really? He told me that he hasn't been with anyone. Are you sure about this?" I inquired.
"Umm yeah I am sure. My friend's brother was his last boyfriend and Jordan cheated on him with at least two other guys from Laguna Hills."
"Well fuck. How am I supposed to tell Kayden this? I mean he is my friend. I don't want to see him get hurt, and it seems like Jordan is just going to use him and hurt him. I do honestly care about him."
"I know that you care about him Isaac, but you cannot tell him about Jordan."
"Why not?!" I cried.
"Think about it, Isaac. If you tell him that you do have feelings for him, he will think that the only reason you told him about Jordan being a manwhore is to eliminate your competition. He wont know whether it is true or not. "
Shit. Mackenzie was definitely right. So now I have to let Jordan date Kayden and potentially cheat on him and break his heart. How was I supposed to allow that to happen?
"Listen Isaac, you cant. Trust me. I know you want to but you cant tell Kayden," Mackenzie said.
"Alright, alright I wont!" I relented. It wasn't going to be easy keeping this to myself though.
Shortly after I promised Mackenzie I wouldn't tell Kayden about Jordan's manwhore reputation, we arrived at Kyler's house. His parents were there, so there was no drinking or anything. We pretty much just chilled in his basement. The guys and I shot some pool and played ping pong, while the girls sat around and talked. We then played Apples to Apples, which is always a great time. We stuck around until around 1 A.M. or so, and then Mackenzie and I went home and went to bed. I then drove her home in the morning, being sure to thank her for coming and listening to my problems. On my drive home from her house, I realized that our friendship had reached a new level. We would be closer now than we ever had been. I was extremely thankful that I had Mackenzie to count on to get me through any of my issues, whether they be with Kayden or a different boy, or even a girl.
I did a lot of thinking over the next week at school. Every time I saw Kayden in between classes, he was texting away on his iPhone. I knew he was texting Jordan, and I tried not to let that bother me, but it didn't work for the most part. He continued to ignore me too. I had no idea how on earth I would break that pattern. I needed him back as a friend. We became really close before he kissed me, and I liked what we had. I figured that I could push aside my feelings for him if we could be friends again. I was especially worried for the team. Our first game was next Tuesday against Irvine Unified. While I absolutely detested Jordan, I had to admit that he was an awesome hockey player. We would have our hands full stopping him and the rest of his team. It was obvious that our offense wasn't near as productive with Kayden and I on different lines, but Kayde was adamant that it remained that way.
Coach tried to persuade him, but he had none of it.
After a stressful week of overthinking everything that had to do with Kayden, not to mention my hellish hockey practices (coach was busting our asses to get ready for Irvine), and all the school shit due, I was quite looking forward to hanging out with my friends on Friday night. Unfortunately, it appeared to be date night. Kyler and Annie went to Staples Center to catch the LA Kings game that Kyler's dad scored two tickets to. Dylan and Maria went out with her parents to see her little sister perform in some ballet thing. Alex and Pat were planning on going to see some movie or something. I got the impression that I wasn't invited, so I assumed that the girls they took to homecoming were going as well. Nick and Casey were off to Laguna Beach to dinner on the shore to celebrate one week together. That was a bit tacky to me, but hey whatever floats their boat. Obviously I wasn't going to hangout with Kayden, since he never talked to me anyways. He was probably doing something with Jordan. I was pretty sure they weren't official yet, but it was certainly close to being that way.
Since my parents usually go out to dinner with friends on Friday nights, I would be on my own for dinner. I had to drop AJ off at the movies, so I decided to go to Chipotle to grab dinner and take it home.
When I was in line, someone tapped me on the shoulder.
"Hey you are Isaac right?" the short, brown-haired boy asked.
"Yeah, I am. Not to be rude but, do I know you?" I asked.
"Well, we have never officially met, but I am Jake Langston. I am a senior at Orange Unified. We are in GSA together," he informed me.
"Ohhh I recognize you now! You were the one taking the tickets at homecoming last weekend!" I exclaimed.
"Yeah that was me!" He replied, no doubt surprised I remembered him. "So what are you up to?"
"Oh just grabbing dinner. All my friends are busy tonight. I just had to drop my brother off at the theater and figured I would get something here real quick before heading home to relax tonight," I explained.
"What about you?"
"Just grabbing a quick meal before heading over to a party in Irvine," Jake said.
"Oh well that sounds like fun!" I replied.
"Yeah it should be!" Jake said. "Hey, if you aren't doing anything, you should totally come!"
"Umm, I don't really do parties," I admitted. "But, oh what the hell. I have nothing better to do tonight.
Here give me your number, and I will text you my address. I will go home, eat, and get changed and ready to go. Pick me up around 8:00."
"Alright dude sounds good!"
We paid for our food, then parted ways. I went home and ate my tacos. After I finished, I took a nice long shower and brushed my teeth really good to remove any foul smell from my mouth, in case there are any cute girls at the party. I chose a nice, short-sleeved blue Abercrombie V-neck shirt with thin orange stripes. I then put on my light washed Buckle jeans and my favorite pair of flip-flops. My hair fell perfectly in its surfer-boy style and I applied a reasonable amount of cologne. I was ready to find a girl tonight. Hopefully someone to get my mind off of Kayden.
Around 8:00, Jake showed up to my house in his blue Ford Escape. We chatted the whole way to the party about music and clothes, finding out that we had more in common than I expected. To be honest, I didn't know all that much about Jake. I knew that we were in GSA, and that he was a senior. But he told me that in Chipotle. So yeah, not too much info there. On the drive, I found out we both liked Red Hot Chili Peppers and Linkin Park, which was awesome.
When we got to the party, I was beyond shocked. Apparently, this house was a hangout for gay high schoolers in the area. At first, I thought it was going to be an awesome place, since there were two hot chicks making out on the front porch. Then, when I opened the front door, I saw a bunch of guys drinking and grinding in the living room. Needless to say, I was certainly not expecting that.
I followed Jake to the kitchen where we got something to drink. I am not a drinker by any means, but I wasn't one to turn down a good Captain Morgan and Coke. The kitchen of this house was very impressive! I found myself staring and walking around a little bit when I bumped into a blonde-haired boy rooting through a cabinent looking for something.
"Oops, my bad," I apologized.
"Nah, don't worry about it bro," the boy replied while extending his right arm. "My name is Andrew.
Welcome to my party. I don't think we have met yet."
"Oh, this is your house? It is beautiful!" I said. "My name is Isaac. Nice to meet you."
"Likewise Isaac. So who are you here with, cutie?" Andrew inquired. I could see him checking me out. He appeared to be kinda drunk, which wasn't too surprising considering the impressive collection of alcohol on the counter. He was probably about 18, about 5'10", and was incredibly thin. I would be surprised if he weighed more than 140 pounds.
"Oh, umm Jake Langston invited me. I hope that isn't a problem."
"Not at all, me and Jake are good friends. I certainly don't mind if he brings hotties like you around."
I wasn't sure whether to be creeped out or flattered by Andrew's comments. I mean he was pretty cute himself, but I wasn't looking for someone so forward. Or a guy in general for that matter. At least, I didn't think I was.
The Captain and Coke kept coming, and before I knew it, I had a pretty good buzz going. I kept talking to random guys, and even danced with one or two. It was really strange I must say, especially when one started to grind on me and I felt his hard on between my cheeks. After that encounter, I removed myself from the living room and went upstairs to find a bathroom to pee. I opened up a few doors upstairs, to find a couple having sex in one room, and an empty bedroom through the other door. The door next to the bedroom was just opening, and it was a bathroom. Finally! I was just finishing up washing my hands after peeing when someone knocked on the door.
"Just a second!" I yelled as I dried off my hands. I opened the door to find Jake standing there.
"Hey Isaac! Having fun?" He asked.
"Yeah, actually it is a good time!" I replied.
"Good I am glad," Jake said. Then, out of nowhere, he leaned in and kissed me. By that point, the alcohol I had drank was in full effect, and I grabbed him by the waist and pushed him back against the door to the empty bedroom. I pinned his arms up as my tongue fought with his for space in his mouth. I could feel his dick grow quickly against mine, which was also reaching full mast. Without thinking, I turned the doorknob and pushed us into the open room, shutting the door with my foot.
Jake spun me around, and pushed me back onto the bed. He proceeded to jump on top of me and resume making out. After about another minute of making out, he abruptly stopped.
"Dude what the fuck?!" I asked.
"Relax Isaac, its time for your pants to come off," Jake replied.
I heard the clanging of my belt as Jake slowly undid the clasp. He then yanked my jeans and boxers down to my knees, exposing my rock hard dick. He pulled my shirt up slightly, exposing my abs. I saw the look on his face as he saw my six pack. I think he thought he was in heaven. He began kissing my stomach right above my belly button, and followed my happy trail right down to my dick. At first, I wasn't sure what he was going to do. The alcohol was really messing with my mind. Then, he did it. He went down on me. He fucking went right down on my dick. His nose was buried in my light brown pubes in no time. He took all 7.5 inches of me without even a hitch. I was moaning and groaning as he worked his tongue down the base of my dick, and then back up. He proceeded to use his tongue to tease my slit. Then, he started to play with my balls oh so gingerly. I couldn't believe how amazing this felt.
"Ohhhh, ohhhh, ohhhh Jake I am going to cummmmmmmm!!!!" I screamed out in exstacy. I figured he was going to pull off, but he kept going.
"UGHHHHHHHHHHH OHHHH YEAH JAKEEEEEEEEEE" I yelled as he swallowed my dick and I shot five massive loads of cum down his throat. He swallowed all of my cum, not even getting any on his chin or my pubes. I was definitely impressed.
"How was that?" He asked as he came up and kissed me on the lips. I could still taste a little bit of my cum from his lips.
"That was amazing! Easily the best blow job I have ever had," I replied.
"Good! Now it is time to return the favor," Jake said.
"Umm what?" I asked.
"Well dude I am hard as a rock! Now get down there and suck my dick!" Jake yelled.
"I am not going to suck your dick!" I yelled back.
"What the fuck Isaac?! I just sucked yours, so you have to do mine!"
"I don't do that shit."
"What do you mean?"
"Im not gay Jake! I don't suck dick!" I exclaimed. Jake looked pissed.
"Well then fuck you! Get your own ride home. Im outta here," Jake said before he took off, leaving me in the bed with my pants still around my knees.
I definitely didn't think this through at all. How was I supposed to know there was a code to sucking dick? Girls never made me go down on them after they blew me! Whatever. Fuck him. Though, I will say that was a mean blow job. I proceeded to put my pants on and text Dylan and ask him to pick me up. He said he would, so I sent him the address to the house. I had a bad feeling that it was a mistake asking him, since his response was, "You have some explaining to do."
Well that concludes Chapter Nine! I hope you enjoyed it! Let me know what you think! Have a fantastic holiday everyone! Look for the next chapter to be done somewhere around December 25th!
Rylan