hay peaple of the nifty land i just whant to say i am an up coming writter to storys so i need you all to tell me if i suck or if i dont it will make me feel good ok well here goes oh yea i could use an editor too im kinda bad with words so please if you could help me out : )
TINKER BOY
get the tinker boy thay yelld its all his falt we all died no no NO! i screamd and woke up in a pool of sweat why dos this have to happen to me? why must i be a tinker boy why? evrey thing just flooding threw my head making a duel paine in the back of my skull. I need some paine killers i must see a docter about the dreams i have there makeing me feel sorry about my self i cant have that for i am a tinker boy ? a tinker boy were the hell that come from what is a tinker boy. my head just trying to put the word all in on piece of the puzzle of the world i live and why.
thats how it starts it all ways starts the same way im running from people yelling get the tinker boy he killed us all. to some this dream whould be nothing but not me i have had the same dream senc i was 15 and in this journl of myn i will tell my story and hope that when i die i can pick it up once agein and finish what i started.
But what did i start i say in a soft voice not whanting to wake my lover up he needs his sleep and so do i so i get back in bed and clos my eyes to start the screaming of so menny angry people agein and as the world slips and evrey thing becoms as it was in the dream i am back were i started .
why dos it allways start in a house and why do i get the name tinker boy and why do thay say i killed them all i dont even know them and by what there wearing thay should not know me for i am of the year 1986 and there well i dont know but thay look like people you whould read about in history books its just to hard to say but why me why not some one els .
THE TINKER BOYS STORY 1
(may be short i just need to know what you people think i might add sex if its needed you tell me )
mm i say as i try to open my eyes out of the sun light dame that hurts i say blinking my eyes trying to wake my boddy up so i can get to work. why did i even have to get a job i say to my self why do i need on when i have lots of monny hmp dosent matter.oh by the way im silver a 19 year old boy/guy lerning that life is harder then it looks on tv. ogod why must the sun be so bright in the morning and why must my eyes burn evrey time i roll my self out of bed trying to let my boddy know that im awak and it need to start working agein .i just wish my dreams were not killing me like thay are im just glad i dont talk about them i can just see evrey one i work with looking at me like i need to go to the loony ben ya that whould look good if i aplyed for a difrent job.i walk to my bathroom and turn on my shower and wiel i wait for it to heat up i get my thing ready that i will need for work then i jump in the shower and wash my self down with sope and comb my hair into the tiny spikes i like so much and get dressed and get ready for another shity day.i get in my car and drive to the only bank around this place wich by the way i ownand in this time its the year 2205 were i can remmber evrey one saying we whould have flting cars and are homes whould be in the air well not fucking likely insted were stuck with an ozon that is going out of wack and acid showeres as rain storms yep thats what has heppend and thats what is happeing right now damit why must thay have so menny chimicls in the air i can remmber when i was young and people saying us as kids were there future well look what thay give us a crappy way of leting us know it was true(im sorry its just wrighting this in my journal means i can say eney thing wich is why i will) as i walk into my place of work i pass out i can feel my boddy drift into another world were evrey things wrong and i can hear the people yelling get the tinker boy damit not agein i say as i take of running into an old house next to a lake why must thay be after me i did nothing im just the tinker boy with the thrist of blood but thats my fault why did i kill him i scream why did i kill my one true love that boy i so loved i took away from evrey one who loved him i should kill my self but i cant becous i am a vampire the last or so i feel i havent felt eney vampirs near me in a long time and my journys led me here and gave me the name tinker boy.but this is just to hard for me to think about it hurts my hart so much why must life be the thing i take and why must love be something i kill why cant people see that i truly hate my self inside i just whant a normal life and to love once and die once but know so far i have been killed 100 times in my liveing times and as silver the gray and i never get to end this blood thirst i have tryed so hard but it stay i was abel to give it up for year till i ment him he made my fangs flar and my mouth ach for his blood his sweet life essens running threw me that thought just made me horny as hell but i said i whould not do it and in the end he was left by me laying in a bloody pool saying his last dieing wored in my ear i love you he said it made me cry the first time in 100 years i cryed over a humen whos life was given to us by the gods to feed on but i could not leve him i had to take him with me i loved him to much for people to see the one true love of myn laying on the streat and as i run the people chase me till i end up in a dead end and i die my self.
Silver buddy get up i here in a male voice and then i am pulled from that dream of my pain and evrey ones anger once agein pulled back to the world i live in now och i say as i feel the pain in my head and i look up to see my humen freand stan standing over me with a helping hand and i take it hay stan was up silver stop it your not working to day your going home now stan i can i own this place what whould it look like if i left? same as it all ways has buddy you need your sleep ok stan i will go just let me get oww! i say as i fall to the floor my legs are like water stan could you help me up and maybe taking me home your self i dont think i whould make it there at all ok silver i will just hold on buddy and as he walks away i drift back to sleep.
get the basterd name tinker boy get him and dont let him go eney were by the time were done with him the birds will have him for food (is this me i say in my head and if this is me i died didnt i ?then why do thay call me tinker boy now and why has this dream changed why am i now holding a bloody humen in my arms this cant be him i say) i take off faster then eney mere mortal can I run to my safe hous were i can turn my lover in to a demon known by menny names but by humens we are called vampiers and as i cut my wrist for the blood to run the door brakes uppen with a boom and the people flood in and the blood falls from my wrist to his mouth that should be anuf i say and as i say that i die agein with a bolt of burning flam shot at me by the towns mage.
silver were here weres here i say your home silly now do you need help to your hous well lets see if i can stand i say as i get up an fall back down on my ass hm i guess not can you help me pleas stan
i allways help you out buddy i know stan your such a life saver yea yea if thats tru give me more payment for work heheh i will try stan now lets get up the stairs (as we make it up the stairs i can feel a life i once new next to me could it be my lover is stan ? or is it me i dont know but as we make it to my door i have a plane set) stan can you saty for a few i need help you need help with what buddy this isay as my lips lock around stans and as i kiss him hard i feel hem not pulling away so i keep going first by bringing my tung out and licking his bottom lip and then tracing areound his lips with my tung and he opens up for me and we sword fight with are tungs for what seems like hours i pull away stan may i ask you something yes silver you may he say stan may i call you tyler (his face changed at hearing that name ) he says who are you silver im your mate tyler the one who was known as the tinker boy no that cant be a town mage fried you yes i know i say but try to hear me out i did die but i was reborn im not a vampier eney but my love i missed you for so long my haert has been calling your name for ever senc i was reborn and that day i killed you tyler ( istart crying )i never ment to i could not help it i loved you so much but my thirst got the best of me it took me over the edge.
hmm this is the start i need to think out what shall happen to my person and this new lover of his >:) hmmm it could turn fore the worse ... i'm sorry to the staff of nifty if my work is hard for you to work with but i just want to try and see what i can do ...